“This is going to be fun, right
Gerben?”
“Yes,” he agreed as they both
stalked Nándor. They closed the distance
with their swords at the ready. “We’ll
have a good time flaying him alive.”
“And then we will regale ourselves when we return to camp!”
Nándor said nothing. He waited for their attack.
Gerben, the meatier of the men, made
the first strike. He had brutal force
behind his blow, but Nándor noticed he was slow to draw back into a defensive a
position. It would be a costly mistake.
Bern came to the fore. He struck fast and hard like a viper before a
swift retreat. Definitely the better swordsman.
“Yeah, we are,” Bern said. “Why?
Scared?”
“No.
I can beat both of you. I was
wondering if you were scared of me?”
Gerben
moved into position. “Let me finish
him. He’s not so tough.”
“Fine, but make it quick,” Bern
said.
The real battle started. Blows were exchanged, testing blows, what
they were made of blows. Then, as fast
as a predator attacks prey, the game changed.
They exchanged dodges, fakes,
swings, block, and thrusts at a furious pace, each searching for that final
strike.
With brutal force, Gerben shoved
Nándor using his sword blade. Nándor
lost his footing on a patch of wet leaves but quickly regained his
balance. Only it was too late. His guard had fallen in that split
second. Neither his sword nor his
sidestep dodged the side slash.
Pain gripped him as hot blood poured
from the wound. He had been lucky. He had only caught the end of the swing. If the blow had landed, he would have been
dead, his ribs shattered and him half gutted.
Determination burned through
him. He changed tactics. He maneuvered the sword position as the next
blow came. Instead of hitting the flat
of the blade, it skittered on the edge as Nándor closed the distance. They were inches from each other, and Nándor
could smell the hot fetid breath from his opponent. He twisted his sword and drove the pommel
into soft underside of Gerben’s jaw.
The man’s face turned beet red. His sword trembled in his hand as he stumbled
back, grabbing his throat. He lunged at
Nandor.
In one swift riposte, Nandor ended Gerben’s life.
Bern’s rushed to his fallen partner,
saw that he was dead, and snapped his head to burn Nandor with his gaze. “You will die.”
Nándor knew he would not last long
against Bern, not injured as he was.
Only he needed to find the strength to finish it.
With a silent prayer, one last
deadly dance began.
*****
They rode in silence, following a rivulet that ran deep into the woods. The first star peeked through the trees when
they reached the riparian camp.
He helped her down, but she yanked
herself away. “Do not touch me!”
He made short work of her
freedom. With a punishing grip on her
wrist, he dragged her toward the awaiting tent. “Stay in there. Don’t come out unless I say. Understand?”
He leered at her. “Unless you
want to be used. Then, by all means,
leave my tent. I’m sure the men would
love to entertain you.”
“None, princess. Just remember that, and we’ll get along just
fine.” He gave her one last leisurely
look. “I knew you would grace my bed. It was only a matter of time.”
*****
He stood over his enemy, a mixture
of triumph and sadness burning him. He
killed them both but at too high a cost.
Groaning, he pressed his hand to his side. A second cut on his sword arm trickled blood. Black spots popped before his eyes.
©djinnia 2014
Way to go Nandor! Hang on, you're strong enough.
ReplyDeleteRodomontade - quite a mouthful!
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It is, which is why I didn't use it in speech!
DeleteGreat excerpt. You might want to tell the reader before each letter what this is from. That way if a reader sees letter "M", they won't have to figure out/hunt for what this is from in case they want to read more :)
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DeleteNice selection of "r" words. I love "risible". :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteYikes. Hope someone comes to Nandor's aid so he can find Ruya.
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Muhahaha! The answer to that will be answered . . . Eventually.
DeleteCome on, Nandor! Now's not the time to give up! Rub some dirt on it!
ReplyDeleteLol! That was hilarious!
DeleteI feel like I need to go through and make a master list of all your words. Like risible. It's such a good word and I so rarely remember to use it.
ReplyDeletethere is already a master list of words on dictionary.com word of the day archives. it has lists upon lists of words. it is awesome.
DeleteRigmarole. Good word. Nandor's certainly in a pickle, isn't he?
ReplyDeleteYes, he is.
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