I
remember scorching fire so powerful my integument
blistered and melted in the raging inferno where my incondite
prison did not protect me. The sick,
hollow feeling as I freefell. Ice formed
in the moist air, burning like acid on the wounds I had suffered. The impact was a blur of agony and exploding
dirt. It rained down along with the broken
remnants of the heat-mutated prison. Shattered
chunks thumped on my abused body and around the crater.
I
remember the native inhabitants as they surrounded me. The sun behind them caused their incarnadine flesh to glow pink.
The
sun was on the opposite side of the sky.
It seemed that I missed the night.
I
heard their whispers. Their language was
strange, unlike that which I knew. Their
awe at my appearance drew my attention. They
had never seen my like before. I knew
then that I could use them.
Then one intrepid
being ventured down where I lay. It
walked on my tortured carcass. I wanted
to squish the tiny head for the pain, but I could not move.
Then
something strange happened. Instauration occurred between us. This creature imbued
me with its knowledge as I shared more. He
was I; I was he. We became one in that
moment.
He
did not tell them of our bond. I knew
that an inchoate idea had formed in his mind;
an idea I fed him. His will was my
will. I wanted free and he made it
happen.
The
bond gave him powers beyond any those puny mortal had ever seen. My
gifts turned an insignificant being into a god among them. I became his instrument for domination. For a brief interstice,
I let him use me.
Then
he was gone through an internecine coup, and
the leader of that coup took the bond.
His rage filled me with joy. His wrath
filled me with power. I fed him sick
desires for destruction.
He
was brought down, and another took his place.
Then the interregnums became shorter
as those who wanted my power were taken from me.
I had only begun to conquer the
world, and I raged.
I
remember the last rebellion. The city
that became the epitome of power through me crumbled into dust in a blast of
white light as if it had never been. I
was incapacitated by the magnitude.
The
survivors dragged me into the catacombs, burying me in the deepest pit. There I saw one last face as they dug into my
chest.
I
remember the feel of living flesh as blood pulsed rhythmically through its
body. My mind wakened to darkness, but
my heart was free in the world. It was
far from me still, but it grew closer as I have urged it to do. It follows my commands like my first. It is strong and will serve me well.
My
time is coming.
©djinnia 2014
Ooooo. Great installment. I love this being mind and thoughts. It really adds to the story.
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Patricia Lynne, YA Author
you don't know how much i struggled with this chapter. I just had to quit and go on to j. then i had a dream . . . (as cheesy as that sounds) and i had an epiphany! bam! first person presentish tense. thankfully it worked.
DeleteWow, you found some fabulous "I" words. I had to look up quite a few.
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i think i went a little overboard now that i took a step back and really looked at it. only they were so cool that i just couldn't stop myself once i got into the groove of writing this chapter. for a while, it was like banging my head on a brick wall
DeleteOK so aside from this being an awesome piece of writing, I totally envy all the "I" words. I--har har, had the hardest time even thinking of words that started with I, lol, let alone something that fit my theme! You rock!
ReplyDeleteI just plowed through the word of the day archives for them. It was only time consuming and tedious. Good thing I have a eme folder with the daily words. It took me about half the alphabet before I remembered I had it!
DeleteThat really can't be good, can't be good at all. He does not sound like someone who should have a time.
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Yeah wouldn't want to meet it on a dark night.
DeleteGreat chapter! Very intriguing. And I had to look up most of the words. Good job! :D
ReplyDeleteWoo! Well, so did I. Hee!
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